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  • this sucks

    Jerry, this sucks. If you're not going to write a real story or at least a proper paragraph, then don't write at all. This is one of the worst blogs, sorry, sentences I've ever heard. You'll definetly fail school. Garenteed failure. Total dropout. It's a miracle that you even managed to pass KINDERGARDEN. And I'm not kidding either. If this is the best you can do for a story, then you should go back to preschool. Although is is hardly even preschool material. The most optimistic thing I can say for this story" is that there are no spelling mistakes.